下面一段话我用英语表达的有语法问题吗？
我在一家工厂工作，天天早晨八点上班，天天晚上六点下班，回家。
Iwork at a factory. I go to factory to work at eight in every morning. At six in the every evening, factory is over, I go home.
下面一段话我用英语表达的有语法问题吗？
Are there any grammatical mistakes existing in the following sentences that I wrote in English ?
我在一家工厂工作，天天早晨八点上班，天天晚上六点下班，回家。
Iwork at a factory. I go to factory to work at eight in every morning. At six in the every evening, factory is over, I go home.
修改为下面的英语句子
I work in a factory and I go to work at eight every morning . I go home from work at six every day.
